问题: 请多多指教!英语小作文
twenty-nine August Wednesday rain
When I got up this morning,the rain has raind
until about noon stop.and my heart became was
good yet withthe air was crisp
解答:
表示日期应该用序数词：twenty-ninth August
When I got up this morning,the rain has raind
until about noon stop.
改成:When I woke up this morning,the rain has rained all night.And it stopped until about noon.
my heart became was good yet withthe air was crisp
became 和was都是起一样作用的，留一个就行。
with后引导的伴随状语是不能用句子的，所以把was去掉或换成being
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