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My story
My name is Michael. I want to tell you a story about myself.
When I graduated from china university of Mining and technology in 2006.After that, I was employed by founder software, work as Net engineer in the past 11 months; I learn much knowledge about visual studio 2005, Microsoft SQL Server 2000 etc. It’s very helpful to my new job.
Now, I was employed by VaconCN, My position is IT website engineer. I think I can do this job very well, at the same time; it’s a challenge to me. I can learn something which I did not know.
I like to play badminton. I play it Xinghai Coliseum Every weekend. It’s very interesting. And also, I like go to KTV with my friend, I like Ben john. I think his best song which is named “it is my life”. When I headed it, this song concert blew me away.
Michael Fang
2007-8-23

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My story

My name is Michael. I will tell you a story about myself.

I graduated from China University of Mining and technology in 2006. I was hired by Founder Software Co., as a Net engineer in the previous 11 months. I significantly benefit from these knowledge on Visual Studio 2005, Microsoft SQL Server 2000 etc learned in school.
I am working in VaconCN now as an IT website engineer. I think I can do this job very well, at the same time; it’s a challenge to me. I can learn more new knowlege.
I like to play badminton. I play it Xinghai Coliseum Every weekend. It’s very interesting. I also like go to KTV with my friends, I like Ben john. I think his best song is “it is my life”. When I headed it, this song concert blew me away.
Michael Fang
2007-8-23