问题: 麻烦高手帮忙看一下哪个英文翻译好?
今天是我自认长大以后,第一次幸福的起床,这种感觉简直太好了!昨天,我跑到奶奶那里,把奶奶拉到了我的房间,陪我待了一整天。尽管和奶奶没有聊上几句,奶奶就在我的床上睡着了,可是只要她待在我的旁边,我就感觉好踏实。后来奶奶回去了,因为之前我忙了很多自己的事情,很累,便睡着了。直到现在醒来,竟是带着甜甜的幸福,我真的失去这种感觉好久了。我突然感到好怕,就像一句话,未曾拥有不曾失去。
版本一:This morning is my only happy morning since I borned 。This feeling is too great,Yesterday , I went to my grandma’s room ,then took her to my room 。My grandma have companied me all the day 。Grandma was sleep when she lie my bed。Even through I didn’t chat much with gandma ,but I feel so happy when my grandma slpet beside me !I did many things about myself ,I tired ....When I get up ,My grandma already left ,I lost this feeling so long .Suddently ,I feel scare , I think a word in china ," if you can't get , you don't lose"
版本二:This morning I got a happy get-up,and this is the first time I got this feeling since I thought I was grown up.How nice this feeling is!Yesterday,I came to my grandma's room,and pulled her to my room.We had stayed together all day along.Though I didn't talk so much with her,I felt comfortable when she was beside me.Then she returned,and I was tried because I had done a lot of my own things,I fell asleep soon.I owned this sweet happiness till I woke up this morning.And this feeling had gone far away from me for such a long time.Suddenly,I am so afraid...Just like a saying:No own and no lost.
问题补充:哪个好哪个不好```
麻烦请说出理由```
谢谢大家!
解答:
都有些错误。第2篇稍微好些。
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